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Above ground, but buried
I'm biting my nails until I bleed
Trapped in a cage of steel
Let me out, let me feel

Vanity will be the death of me
Only when I pass I will be free
I'm not alone, what we produce appeal
I beg you, let me out, let me feel

Euthanize me, before I'm skinned alive
I chew my hands, I will never survive
Nothing but a product of consumption
Who will stand with me in objection?


I'm sore, I'm aching
Amputated, bones breaking

I'm a silver fox
Another poem. Would love to hear some interpretations ;)

Picture drawn by me, sorry for the poor quality, I want to get a scanner soon...

EDIT: Ok, so I got some feedback on another site, and they told be to correct a few things, and I have done so :) Hope you like it!
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iRawh Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Amazing!
I love the way you have described the whole thing.
In my opinion, my favorite sentence would be the 'I beg you, let me out, let me feel'.
I think that is the strongest part about the poem as you have mentioned it twice xD.
Though I'm still not quiet sure what it's about? But that doesn't really matter.
Great work! :meow:
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Dualitie Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! ^^
At first I was describing life at a fur farm, but the discription also suits the situation of many humans imprisoned all over the world as well. I think (hope) it can be used both ways ;)
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iRawh Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I thought that xD.
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SofusGirl Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very powerful.
Good job :)
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Dualitie Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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NicolaiGrey Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
amazing piece.
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Dualitie Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^_^
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